Monday, December 22, 2008

Angel Deer-A Christmas Story.

(This story is fiction!)

It was going to be and especially wonderful Christmas this year, Patty
Hudson though, eyeing her watch anxiously. Two o’clock in the afternoon.
They should be arriving any minute. Just then, the gravel on her driveway
began popping, followed by a "honk, honk," of her daughter’s car. Patty
hurried out to greet them.

"Hi, Mom," Anne said, getting out the car and giving her a hug, while the pint sized girl in the back seat struggled to free herself from her seat belt.

"Hi, Nana," a sweet voice shouted, jumping into her arms. "We’re finally

"Yes, you are, and I couldn't be happier," Patty replied, covering her face with kisses. "Let’s go inside where it’s nice and warm."

"Do you have your Christmas tree up yet?" the little girl asked as they
walked through the door.

"Not yet, Nicole. I thought that tomorrow you and I’ll go to the cedar woods and cut down our own tree. Then we can spend the evening decorating it. What do you think of that idea?"

Nicole’s dark blue eyes grew wide with wonder as she snuggled in her
grandmother’s lap. "Oh that will be wonderful, Nana!"

"That does sound wonderful. Too bad I can’t be here to go to the woods with you two," Anne said in a disappointed tone.

"Well, why don’t you call your boss and tell him you decided to take the
entire week off. Then you won’t have to make the four hour drive back to the city until after Christmas," Patty suggested.

"I can’t, Mom. But you and Nicole can enjoy some time together, and Jeff and I’ll be here on Christmas Eve."

After Anne drove off the following morning, Patty and Nicole fed the
chickens and ducks and filled the wild bird feeders to the brim. Then Nicole watched the droves of finches, cardinals, chickadees, nuthatches and woodpeckers feed, while Patty began preparing lunch.

"Are we going to get the Christmas tree right after lunch?"

"Yes, we are," Patty smiled at the tiny imp with the long brown pony tail.
"The sun is shining and it will be warmer outside by then. I would not want you to get too cold. "

It was one o’clock in the afternoon when they were finally walking up the
old lane that led to the cedar grove.

"This looks so different from the way it looked in the summer,"Nicole
remarked, walking just ahead of Patty, who was carrying her bow saw.

"Yes, it does. And all the biting insects are gone now, so you won’t be
going back to the city with your usual summer souvenirs. "

"That’s funny, Nana. Are we almost by the cedar grove?"

"Just a little ways up from here, sweetie. Are you getting tired?"

"Oh, no, I was just wondering. Oh, there they are. I see them." Nicole ran
ahead, eager to reach them. "They look so beautiful!"

This cedar grove, in the middle of an oak and hickory forest, has always
enchanted Patty. The cedars came in many different sizes, and their green, cylindrical shapes among the leafless hardwood forest in the winter, was a visual delight.

"How about this tree, Nana? Or this one?" Nicole asked, running from tree to tree.

"Now remember, it can’t be a real tall one. We have to get it back to the
house, and it’s a half a mile walk," Patty reminded Nicole. "Let’s
go that way. I see several smaller trees over there. "

They walked on among the cedars, turning left, then right, excited about all the beautiful trees the grove offered. Finally, Patty stopped in front of a six foot tree, and after looking it over, announced, "I think this one here
is perfect. Not too tall, not too small, with beautifully shaped branches.
It will look perfect in the bay window. What do you think, Nicole?"

"Oh, you are right, Nana. This tree is perfect. Will it be hard to cut

"No, the trunk is not very thick. Let me see now," Patty crouched down and examined the trunk of the cedar. "Good thing I’m wearing gloves. Cedar branches are prickly," she added.

Once the tree was down, Patty held on to the trunk and pulled it along as
they headed back towards the lane. Nicole, just ahead of her, kept on
chatting and walking, commenting on everything in sight. After some time, Patty stopped for a moment and glanced at her watch. It was almost three o’clock! Had they been in the woods that long? And they should have reached the lane already, she thought, an uneasy feeling creeping into the pit of her stomach.

"Are you getting tired, Nana?" Nicole asked, glancing back at her.

"No, I’m just shifting hands," she replied, walking on.

After a while, Patty glanced at her watch again. It was fifteen minutes past three. She knew in her heart that they should have reached the old lane by now."Let’s turn here, sweetie, and walk towards those oak trees," she said, trying not to sound anxious. She did not want to frighten the little girl.

But as they reached the oak woods, there was still no sign of the old lane,
and it would be getting dark in another hour!

"Nicole, let’s sit down and rest a minute on this fallen log," she finally

"You look worried, Nana. Is anything wrong?" Nicole asked, sitting down next to her.

"Well, I am a bit worried. I think we might be lost. I believe we have been
walking in circles. That’s not hard to do in the woods. I should have been
more careful. I am so sorry I wasn’t."

The little girl moved closer to her and put her arm around Patty's shoulder. "It isn’t your fault, Nana."

"Oh, but it is my fault. It wouldn’t be so bad if I was out here by myself,
but..." She stopped herself. There was no sense in frightening the child
even more.

"I tell you what. Let’s you and I say a little prayer before we continue on
our way. I think that might help."

"Okay, Nana, and I know just the prayer we need to say," Nicole responded enthusiastically, her sweet voice enunciating the words of the prayer clearly and without a single mistake:

"Angel of God, my guardian dear,
To whom His love commits me here,
Ever this day, be at my side,
To light and guard,
To rule and guide. Amen."

"Amen. That was beautiful, Nicole," Patty said, pulling the little girl into her arms and holding her close. Tears welled in her eyes as thoughts of spending a chilly night in the woods, with a trusting four year old, plagued her.

"Nana, look! A deer!" Nicole, wriggling out of her arms, suddenly whispered, jolting Patty out of her dour thoughts. She turned towards Nicole’s pointing hand and saw it, too. It was a sleek doe, standing no more than ten feet from them.

"Nana, she says we should follow her," Nicole announced, standing up. "She will lead us to the lane."

The little girl is hallucinating, Patty thought, as she stood up, too. "But Nicole, the doe will probably run off, if we try to approach her," she said out loud.

"No, Nana. She is telling me that we should follow her," Nicole insisted.

Patty looked at the serious expression on her granddaughter’s face, and then glanced towards the doe, still standing there looking at them.

"Well, why not, we’re already lost," she said, taking Nicole’s hand with one hand, and holding on to the cedar tree with the other, as they began walking towards the animal.

The doe turned and walked through the woods slowly, glancing back often, as if to make sure they were still following her. And of course, they were...a small girl with faith in her heart, and an elderly woman with hope in hers. A few minutes later, they found themselves back on the familiar old lane! There, the doe stopped and gave them one last look, then she turned and gracefully bounded back into the woods.

"Come on, sweetheart, let’s hurry on home to the warm house. The sun is
going down and it’s getting chilly," Patty said, sighing with relief and
saying a silent "thank you, Lord."

"Thank you, angel deer!" Nicole cried out after the vanishing animal. Then taking her grandmothers hand, she said, "Okay, Nana, let’s hurry home. I am getting a little cold now." .....

Christmas turned out especially meaningful this year, Patty was thinking as she said good bye to her departing family settling into their car for the drive back to the city.

"I’ll miss you," she said to the little imp, giving her one last hug.

"I’ll miss you, too," Nicole responded. Then getting close to Patty's ear,
she whispered, "I think you should say the guardian angel prayer each time you go to the woods, Nana. It will keep you safe."

"Thank you for your wonderful advice, sweetheart," Patty Hudson whispered back, tears welling in her eyes. "I promise to follow it faithfully."

(c) copyright 2002, by Renie Burghardt

I hope you enjoyed the little story, friends, and I thank you for taking time out of your busy schedule to read it. Somehow, I can't seem to get the formatting right on
it. This will be my only post until next week, as I will be happily busy as well. Have a wonderful holiday with your family and friends.

Merry Christmas, Happy Holidays, Happy Hannukah, evryone!

Blessings from the woods!


Patti said...

What a beautiful christmas story Renie! I enjoyed reading it! Thank you for sharing it with us. I hope you have a very Merry Christmas!!!

Granny Annie said...

This is such a beautiful story. Do you cry when you write things this sweet? I'm going to connect it on Christmas Day on my ILYB link.

Leslie said...

Oh, Renie that was just beautiful. I hope you have the best Christmas ever. Stay well and warm, it is 5 here this morning. God Bless, you and your family. Love, Leslie

Mad Bush Farm Crew said...

Hi Renie,

I just sat and read every word and line of your wonderful story. My girls would love to read it as well so I'll be sitting them both down so they can enjoy the story too. Angels truly can come in many different ways

Merry Christmas to you Renie
Big hug and lots of love
Liz and the girls

Jmkdreak said...

Fiction based on non-fiction, lol.

Love the story!

stay WARM!

Sandy said...

Wow, I LOVED that story! Really really enjoyed it. Have a wonderful Christmas Renie!

Lakeland Jo said...

loved the story- thanks x

Dawn said...

That is a beautiful story!! I hope you have a wonderful Christmas!!

Loretta said...

I so enjoyed the story. I hope you have a wonderful Christmas.


Brenda said...

Very nice Christmas story Renie! You are a very good story teller. Hope you enjoy your Christmas holidays. Many blessings and hugs to you and your family!

Anonymous said...

Wishing you all the best this Christmas and a blessed New Year!

God bless you and your family! ♥

2 LMZ FARMS said...

I loved the story. Hope you and yours have a very Merry Christmas

Old Lady Lincoln said...

Dear Renie,
What a beautiful story. Thanks for writing and posting it. You and your family have a wonderful holiday and a terrific Merry Christmas.
Love, Patty

hippo chick said...

What a wonderful story. I wish I had read it before I did the Children's Sermon on Sunday - about "angels". Thank you for sharing, dear Renie.

Have a very Merry Christmas.

~hippo hugs~

Mary said...

And a Merry Christmas to you, Miz Renie. This is a beautiful story. I loved it. Children have such faith, don't they? We need to be as little children so God can lead us. I have a feeling there is a bit of fact in this fictional story.

I wish you much love and laughter with you family during the Christmas season. May love, laughter, good health and prosperity be yours throughout 2009.


JennyLu said...

Sweet story Renie. Sorry I didn't get to stop by sooner and read it. Your story really lifed my spirts!

Merry Christmas sweetie, just in case the holiday runs away and I don't get back online!


audrey` said...

Blessed Christmas, Renie =)

Linda said...

I really enjoyed your beautiful story. Wishing you and your family a Merry Christmas!!!!

Janice Thomson said...

A sweet sweet story Renie!
A very Merry Christmas to you and your family. May peace and joy be yours in 2009.

Mississippi Songbird said...

It's a beautiful story.. Thank you for sharing it with us.. Merry Christmas and God Bless you and your family... Bunches of hugs...Stephanie

JennyLu said...

Merry Christmas

star in heaven said...


Love the story...

Merry Christmas to you and Happy New Year :)

Take care

Lots of love

Deborah Wilson said...

A very sweet story, Renie. Merry Christmas to you and yours and Ms. Eileen too.

Hootin' Anni said...

Fabulous Christmas story. YOU are truly talented with words. I loved reading this.

Happy New Year Renie, and thanks for the well wishes for Christmas..

Steve Ballmer said...

Very vood blogging!

Mountain Mama said...

I loved your story Renie. Yes an Angel Deer. Why not? The Lord works in mysterious ways.
We had a lovely Christmas with lots of snow. I hope your Christmas was precious too.

Dawn said...

I hope you had a great Christmas!!

BClark said...

Thank you for sharing your story with us, a blending of faith and love. You do such a wonderful job on them. I know you have been busy having a wonderful time. Have a fabulous New Year!!

Poetikat said...

Charming post. Hope you and your family and pets had a wonderful Christmas, Renie.



ancient one said...

Loved it... you are such a great story teller... I hope you had a very nice Christmas!!

audrey` said...

"Faith in her heart and hope in hers..." is the most encouraging sentence in this very beautiful story. Thank you, Renie. You're so gifted in writing =)

I love the prayer too :o)

Take care (((HUGS)))

Nancy said...

What a wonderful story, Renie! I was INTO it from the very beginning! I would like to link that post to my blog next year since I already missed it this year, if that would be alright with you. I loved it!!! You do have a way with words!!!

Hope you had a wonderful Christmas! I can't believe it's all over....again! I am going to get my stuff all done early next year...I say this every year, but this time I really MEAN it! LOL

Wishing you a wonderful and healthy 2009!

(((((( HUGS ))))))

Jaina said...

What a beautiful story, I love it! Thanks so much for sharing :)

The W.O.W. factor said...

Renie, this story is amazing! I love it!!!
I hope your Christmas was filled with much joy and love as this story tells. It may be fiction, but I "saw" you and your property as I read it! So heartwarming, Renie, and thank you for sharing!
Many Hugs~

Anonymous said...

Absolutely Beautiful. I could imagine you adn your Granddaughter in those woods, You painted a beautiful picture of the wonder and trust in a childs heart.
Love Sue